What do you think of this poem?

How beautiful the Queen of Night, on high


Her way pursuing among scattered clouds,


Where, ever and anon, her head she shrouds


Hidden from view in dense obscurity.


But look, and to the watchful eye


A brightening edge will indicate that soon


We shall behold the struggling Moon


Break forth,--again to walk the clear blue sky.

What do you think of this poem?
very nice. I like the higher-style of language. Some people think poetry today should be all couched in modern speech - dumbed down, in other words - but a little bit of dignity to the words goes a long way in establishing style.


kudos to you!
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Reply:Is it about the moon?At first i thought it was about a woman but then i realized it's either about the moon or the sun.


I think it's a good poem,congratulations.
Reply:wooow , i guess you should say it outloudin the oprah winfrey show
Reply:beautiful! i don't get any of it, but the words click
Reply:nice imagery
Reply:very angelic... Doesn't it just make you automatically think of a royal angel or something?
Reply:I like some of it, but it does need a little work.
Reply:Good work!
Reply:cool
Reply:it's a poem

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