Here's a poem i wrote last night. it might be confusing.?

I'm the daughter of the sea,


Goddess of the land,


Mistress of the moon,


Huntress of the clan.





I'm the child of the trees,


Sister of the sun,


Queen of the creatures,


And always on the run.





I am everything,


And i know everyone,


But i am being hunted,


By a crazy one.





This person has no limits,


And no boundaries too,


I'm so fed up with running,


I don't know what to do.





But everywhere i go,


She always turns up,


She's been chasing me around,


Since i was a pup.





It doesn't take much to see her,


It's actually really clear,


All i have to do,


Is look right in the mirror.

Here's a poem i wrote last night. it might be confusing.?
kayde i really loved this poem.This is the best poem i;ve seen for quite some time.When you write ; you don;t fu#k around,,Nice work,,Thanks for sharing Shelly
Reply:Oooh I like!
Reply:it's not confusing... the poem really confuses itself...


first "it"(whoever the one speaks) was a girl then became a great woman, then a child but became a man....





one question... are you? you know? confused about your identity? no hard feelings! X(





or what i see and understand is that you are a type of person who doesn't know what to do exactly as what she wants to...


***those are just negative comments where first impression may occur when somebody read it... here comes the positive side!





as what i see... the poem states that either the writer or the one who speaks in the poem says out loud that he/she/it wants to be everything... wants to please somebody or everybody in a way each would like to... not who she was...


wants anyone he meets be pleased the way they want to and not to be herself...


even risking the way he was for the sake of others... ^^
Reply:Real poets (how i wish iwas!) doesnt get confused. The length may be wrong, the grammar may be wrong, the marks may be wrong, but the thought can always be tracked.





What I think is you wrote the poem after some argument with a friend or friends. You got your pride with you but you neither can step down or step up.





Many writers who use mirror in poetry dont actually get a real view of what's in there.
Reply:quite good and this poem is from your heart it's how you feel it didn't confuse me, but even if it did it wouldn't matter as you wrote it and it belongs to you and at that moment when you put ink on paper and created it, the words new what you wanted them to say.
Reply:i think your getting better day by day. kinda hard to remember how much you've changed on your poietry
Reply:You are right ! It's confusing.
Reply:I was only confused for a few seconds, then the message hit me. very good. You do seem to get better every day. I hope you continue to write poetry because you have a gift. You sould enter them in poetry contests online, or in a book. i've had soem poms submitten in some books when i was in 4th grade. Good job!

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