Night With An Angel.......My Poem!! How is it? Rate Please....?

Here is a poem....how is it? how many marks will you give out of ten?





Among the thousand stars one night


Appeared a fairy, white in light


My eyes were clos'd but heart was wake


By chance, to feel her song of might





Nearer she came the singing sprite


Emptied her bough the owl in fright


Her beauty spread in air a light


The brook the paus'd to have a sight





The sky drizzled as if in bliss


A breeze then came and gave a kiss


She rais'd her hands and did a touch


The heart of heaven I felt in this





Within my thoughts a morn then born


I caught a sight of graveyard yon


To there I walk'd to know who sounds


I found a baby, newly born





Beside the grave I saw a scene


There lay on marsh an eartly queen


A gale then broke and took her 'way


To heights and heights I never had seen





Across my mind a scene then rode


A Kingless throne and crown it show'd


And people taking holy bath


In streams of grief that overflow'd





At once a star in earth had shone


I saw a fairy in that throne


A thousand stream of bliss then flow'd


Out of her heart to miles unknown.

Night With An Angel.......My Poem!! How is it? Rate Please....?
Wow. This is beautiful. Very nice detail, almost movie script like. I'm saving this one into my favorites. The additional info. also muchly appreciated. I was thinking more "Harry Potter" when I was reading it, and now that I've read it a few times, the "religious content" really shines. I hope alot of people get to read this. Excellent stuff. Write on!
Reply:this is very good. I could really imagine the scene. love it! keep writing!
Reply:8.5 With some rework it would be a 9 plus. Well done.

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